问题描述：
英语翻译
Myfeelingabout《afire》
Thestoryismainlyabout:Thehouseisonfire,Thefiremanarrivedintimetoputoutthefire,laterwediscoveredthatthecauseofthefirewasalightedcigaertte,Fromthatdayonwords,Myfathergaveupsmokeing.
Myfeelingabout:Everyoneshouldbecareful,Donotlikethefatherinthestoryofthesamecareless,Throwacigavetteonthecarpet,Consignedtotheflames,Butforfiremenarrivedintime,Mayalsoburnotherpeoplego!
Thisisareallygreatstory,Youshouldreadit.
嗯..我在不大改的情况下给你微调一下. Myfeelingabout《afire》 Thestoryismainlyabout:Thehousewasonfire.Thefiremanarrivedintimetoputoutthefire,andlaterwediscoveredthatthecauseofthefirewasalightedcigarette.Fromthatdaytheauthor'sfathergaveupsmoking. Myfeelingabout:(?)Everyoneshouldbecareful.Donotlikethefatherinthestoryofthesamecareless(?),throwingacigavetteonthecarpet.Consignedtotheflames(?),Butforfiremenarrivedintime,Mayalsoburnotherpeoplego!(?) Thisisareallygreatstory,Youshouldreadit. 错误还是比较多的,相对第二段,第一段的错误较少.lz应该把语法好好看看.第二段的中式语法太严重了导致我有点看不懂了.拼写有两个错误,smoking和cigarette.然后就是标点符号的运用,在句号后面应该空格后大写,逗号不需要大写.但是,逗号的运用也不能随便.这样吧,我把我理解到的lz的读后感第二段给改一下. Frommypointofview,everyoneshouldavoiddoingthesimilarthingsaswhattheauthor'scarelessfatherhasdoneinthestory,throwinglightedcigarettesonthecarpet,whichmayeasilycatchfireinthehouse.Fortunately,thefiremenarrivedintime,ortheotherpeoplemaybeinjured. 我也是个正在努力学英语的学生..这个只是交流...希望楼主能加油~再接再厉啊!~
这位大哥，我才小学五年级
....我是姐姐.这样啊.那你的水平还不错诶!!虽然我不知道5年纪的水平应该是怎么样的..那你把标点符号改一改就好了.你老师会原谅你的!!相信我
这是要去比赛的。。。已经交了｜。｜没用了＃－＃
好。。楼主加油！！！！
